*** Dave H. said:
A note on Charade’s gloves/gauntlets. I keep riffing off the original drawing, which does have them as (enhanced) gloves. And that would need to be plural in terms of powering up the batons. And to let her use dual pistols, batons, or just punch people real good, they would need to be supple enough to not interfere with her movement. So that’s my feedbac on the “???” highlight. But I’m really liking the overall effect. (And, to be honest, in comic book style, it doesn’t have to all make “sense”, just look good.
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I like losing the “mouth” on the mask. I get that it upped the creepy factor, and maybe something else can work there, but I like this better
I’ll fix the dual gauntlets next time I do a picture with Charade.
Oddly, removing the mouth was more me forgetting about it. Shows how important that was to the design. Honestly, the closer I make Charade to a stylized SWAT officer, the better it feels. Which reminds me, I need to do generic Vyortovian soldiers…
Bill G. said:
Radiance: Definitely has a Symmetra thing going on with the side-slit-dress/apron look, plus the diamond accents, face screen, and so on, but almost in the Brigitte colors. Switching franchises, between the face, the hair, and the suggestion of muscle definition, she almost looks like someone remixed Amethyst and Pearl.
She still has a secret identity, so either a face-concealing mask or a holographic false face is called for.
Ugh, I was actually going for more of a Mercy look, though now that you point it out, it does look very Symmetra-like. Funnily, mentioning the Steven Universe stuff, I was going for a Peridot look with with the face mask. I imagine in-universe, the face mask does some false face stuff or just is more oblique and the face being visible is an artistic conceit.
Bill G. said:
In terms of overall subjective feel, this feels much more earthy than the airy Pneuma she came from. I feel like she wants to stick close to those roots for awhile, with a more air-water kind of thing going on. I totally agree that the face and posture sells “I’m here to help”, and that is awesome.
That’s some unintentional drift. I’ll need to fix that with future iterations.
Bill G. said:
Otto: That is about the most 80’s bear I can imagine. The only thing missing is the matchstick hanging out of the corner of his mouth. Looks great.
Dammit, I could have added a matchstick. Next time!
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