I’ll echo Mike that this was really nifty, and in all the fine things he says around your writing (coupled with your cartoon direction).
I’m sorry, I had to read that three times before my brain didn’t have it be something wonderful (if confusing) about the Spider-Man Noir universe being run in Masks.
Alycia!Noir: How do I know I can trust you are who you say you are.
Summer: We know things, things that could only come from another version of you. They’re – well, it might be a bit upsetting to hear someone say them out loud, but, well, to put it as gently as –
Alistair: Your dad once did X to you, you once committed Y, and on one occasion you ate an entire liter of Z because you were so upset about some encounter with Jason in Tanzania.
Summer: – or that.
I wouldn’t do that to those kids. Or, from another perspective, to Byron and Achilles.
I understand the concern there, and would be reluctant myself. That said, speaking for myself, I think you have a great handle on the characters I know best, and have always been open to reactions from others. If you wanted to carry the story on further (light-heartedly or not), you have my blessing.
And also my blessing if you want to go out on top and turn that creativity to something else.